8 thoughts on “Whats in a brand?

  1. John Parker

    Nice to see the progression.

    It *might* be nicer with a lower case ‘d’ in development (would possibly feel more balanced), but as you say such things are mucho subjective. :-)

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  2. Al Post author

    On designer recommendation am playing with the typography now, might be able to balance it a bit more! Thanks for the feedback!

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  3. Jamie Mill

    Well done for persevering with this stressful process. I don’t do a lot of design work but I do have a design background of sorts. I do think you’ve developed the idea to a good point, but there’s been one crucial thing letting some of these designs down:

    They all give away a bit too much about the tools that were used to produce them. You set out to create a vector logo, and that’s what you’ve got. All of them look like something made in illustrator (gradients, perfect hard lines). Except, interestingly the last. Because you dropped back to a silhouette, and ditched the gradients, you have something that doesn’t give as much away about how it was made. It could have been cut out of paper for all we know, which is great. The gears also have a detail and no obvious straight lines which makes them look more human than the other designs.

    But for the final push I recommend you look at your typeface. Again, it’s giving a bit too much away because it’s such a standard typeface that it could have been assembled in MS Word. I think a sans-serif face is right, but maybe search for something with a tiny bit more personality. An example is Aller from daltonmaag.com which has a free licence. Or if you feel flush have a browse round myfonts.com. But stick to something conservative and not too fancy, otherwise it will clash with the cleanliness of the gears. It needs to be of a similar visual language to your mark.

    Also, I would just nudge down the AB as the space beneath it is a little too high and looks like it’s floated up away from the line below. Make the vertical space between the two lines of text roughly match the horizontal space between the mark and the type, so you have a harmony in your negative space…. lovely!

    Hope that helps a bit!

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    1. Al Post author

      Hi Jamie, thanks for the great critique, excellent advice, and very similar to the first reaction from some graphic designer friends of mine. I am looking at the typeface now and experimenting a bit. Having looked back at the design I agree completely with the font spacing, it is very unbalanced. These however are tweaks which very much I should be able to make.

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  4. Neil Crookes

    I think the last option is defo the best too and with Jamie’s comments it’ll be ace.

    I’m glad you’ve not gone with abstract the flaccid cock and balls in option #3 ;-)

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    1. Jamie Mill

      Ha ha that was actually my number 2 favourite. But now you’ve pointed out the cock and balls I think that one’s best laid to rest!

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  5. Damian Stafford

    Hi Al.

    For what it’s worth–which isn’t very much–my advice would be to stick with your existing, initials-based logo and not bother adding the “development” bit. What you’re talking about seems to be your logo as opposed to your brand, which will surely become established as you work for clients and showcase it on your web site. And some of your work will inevitably be design, and consultancy, as well as development – hence my suggestion to leave out the word “development”, which people don’t care about anyway.

    On a broader note, surely the somewhat nebulous concept of “brand” and its creation is in any case not within the jurisdiction of any single discipline, whether that be design, user-experience (sigh), creative (whatever that means), the techies, the customer service team, the marketing and sales departments yada yada, but the net result of what a business actually does–neither how splendid its logo looks nor how nice its hairdo is–and, ultimately, how compelling its offering is to consumers in the shark-infested waters of capitalism.

    You have plenty of talents that will be valuable to businesses. Don’t waste time fretting over your logo. I don’t suppose the founders of Google, Facebook, etc. ever did.

    Cheers –

    D.

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